Week 3- Interim Presentation 1

This week was the first interim presentation.

Below are the 4 poster concepts i presented and a summary of the feedback i received from my teachers and peers. (Full feedback sheet in physical workbook.)

Most people commented that although this concept was good, they felt the blue text 'patriarchy' was unnecessary and took away from the main idea and would be better represented in some other way. One other person noted that this looks like the Japanese flag.... and now i can stop seeing this so i'd quite like to change the background to perhaps a blurry photograph of a window?

This was my most popular concept by far, though one person noted that having the checkered background made it appear quite busy overall, in developing this concept further I think a plain/ flat colour background may be more successful. (Try a more minimalistic approach)


There was only one comment about this concept and that was that it was unclear specifically about wether it was that men were restraining women with money or just that women were being held back by the economy in general. If i were to continue with this concept i would need to find a way to clarify this more.

There was no comments about this concept, which is understandable as it's also my least favourite as it's less eye catching than the others and is quite messy in its design, it doesn't really have much potential in development in comparison to my other concepts.

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